Shop Talk
Bob's day on the phones
So let's recap a little bit about our friend Bob. In the last few weeks he's gotten free admission to NASA, got to experience a free spaceship ride (no matter how brief or the outcome) and has since made a new enemy at the local Wal-Mart.
If we remember correctly the last time we left Bob he was storming out of Wal Mart, fuming angry about his AT&T phone not being repaired after his recent BOOMING experience.
So Bob heads home, wondering just how he's going to get back at these companies.
Upon arriving at his house Bob storms inside and picks up his landline with AT&T, that he hasn't paid since its activation. He makes a mental note to himself to make sure and call them to complain about his service to get the next month for free. Bob dia...
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If we remember correctly the last time we left Bob he was storming out of Wal Mart, fuming angry about his AT&T phone not being repaired after his recent BOOMING experience.
So Bob heads home, wondering just how he's going to get back at these companies.
Upon arriving at his house Bob storms inside and picks up his landline with AT&T, that he hasn't paid since its activation. He makes a mental note to himself to make sure and call them to complain about his service to get the next month for free. Bob dia...
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yeah, it is.. lol... took me about 15 mins to read it, inbetween sales , and talking with custies walking up... i mean.. DAMNIT, im tryin to read about bob here!!
good job though!
good job though!
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Leave Bob stories to more skilled storytellers please. Decent idea, but your execution was mediocre at best.
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lol thanks for the support. I'm bored at best so figured its an easy way to kill time.
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Lol kill some time by writing a rough draft or two before publishing..........
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you do know that u didn't have to read it.. right..
and that u arn't the editor n' chief out here???
and that u arn't the editor n' chief out here???
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tanya_ATT said:
*you *aren't
I like Bob stories.... It was a decent story with potential, and I want to read another, if alineman puts a little more effort into the Bob outings. I know I don't 'have to' read them, but I would like to. On that note, you don't have to read my responses if it gets your panties in a twist..... 🤣 🤣 I don't know about you, but i have standards, and I don't accept anything that falls below them.
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well, u said.. and i quote "Leave Bob stories to more skilled storytellers please"
wasn't very nice, or encourageing..
ever think that ur idea of a poorly told story, could be that persons best work.
and my panties aren't in a bunch.. goin' commando today.. thanks! 😉
wasn't very nice, or encourageing..
ever think that ur idea of a poorly told story, could be that persons best work.
and my panties aren't in a bunch.. goin' commando today.. thanks! 😉
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😲 I love dirty talk. 👀
Good point, my firstpost in the thread..... wasn't too constructive.... But I got more helpful.... It was quite apparent that was not his best work, he can do better. With practice, everyone can do better. All it takes for his stories to improve would be a better understanding of structure, which can be accomplished by visiting some websites. Cut a stupid custy some slack! 😉
Good point, my firstpost in the thread..... wasn't too constructive.... But I got more helpful.... It was quite apparent that was not his best work, he can do better. With practice, everyone can do better. All it takes for his stories to improve would be a better understanding of structure, which can be accomplished by visiting some websites. Cut a stupid custy some slack! 😉
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ajlineman said:
Well we all know how the story goes, Bob escalates and after 2 hours on the call the supervisor caves in. I'll save you the details, we all know how Bob works.
Details are the meat of bob stories. It would be a good idea to stop and brainstorm, don't rush through it. Good stories have a flow to them, learn to go with it.
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i liked that bob story.
although adding Don to his Bob is scary....
thanks my boyfriend just totally made me cry while im at work so i needed that to make me laugh....
kudos...
although adding Don to his Bob is scary....
thanks my boyfriend just totally made me cry while im at work so i needed that to make me laugh....
kudos...
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