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madmatg

May 10, 2010, 8:24 PM
and i have nothing to write on at work I'm going to use this section to start writing my book:

Rough Sketch

1. snazzy title(history of Andrew Ryan up to deciding to build Rapture)

2. Done with the Parasites(contruction of Rapture and the happy early years)

3. Inevitability(classes arise, ryan becomes more tyranical, smuggling begins first crimehead, ADAM found)

4. snazzy title(ADAM is refined and begins abuse, Ryan more tyranical, small conflict ryan v smuggler/low class(Atlas))

5. snazzy title(ADAM is abused heavily,Ryan siezes power, Full war breaks out at new years)

6. snazzy title(Ryan killed, Atlas takes control short-lived then killed)

7. snazzy title(power struggle ensues, Lamb takes over)
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madmatg

May 17, 2010, 9:35 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris slowly sank into the Atlantic. Suddenly a large splash above as a wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending propellor parts whizzing through the water around the destruction. It's sharp edges cut through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream through his closed mouth.

Out he bursts taking a few large thankful breaths. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and terribly the flames are the only thing he can see that is moving. Somewhat distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on. Finding a piece of fuselage...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 17, 2010, 9:45 PM
Second draft
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic moving as if part of some sort of sadistic piece of art. Suddenly there's a large bang above as a wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending propellor parts whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water looking for blood, but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings a body to life.
>>>>
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madmatg

May 22, 2010, 6:06 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic moving as if part of some sort of sadistic piece of art. Suddenly there's a large bang above as a wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending propellor parts whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water seeking flesh, but instead of more destruction the commotion brings a body to life.
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madmatg

May 22, 2010, 8:11 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic moving as if part of some sort of sadistic piece of art. A wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending parts and propellors whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water seeking flesh, but instead of the destruction it seeks the commotion brings a body to life.
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madmatg

May 22, 2010, 8:15 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending parts and propellors whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water, but instead of destruction they bring a body to life as they go past a head.
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madmatg

May 22, 2010, 8:17 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending parts and propellors whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water, but instead of destruction they bring a body to life as they go past it's head.
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:52 AM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
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Joby Dick

Nov 10, 2010, 11:38 PM
Lifeless bodies and debris shoot into the water as if they were torpedoes dropped by enemy aircraft. Soon after they buoy to the surface of the water, the left wing of the now-destroyed airplane, along with thousands of razor-sharp fragments launch into the water. Rather than cause more mutilation of the corpses floating inanimately, the onslaught of destruction resurrects one body.
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Amarantamin

Dec 5, 2010, 10:43 PM
Metal fragments and flaming bodies hurtle into the water with a peppered splash. They slowly returned to the surface only to meet the detached wing of their crashing flight. The propeller skimmed the edge of the water for a moment before being torn asunder, scattering heated shards across the scene. The metal fragments gashed and impaled the dieing passengers, leaving them all to a gruesome fate; all, but one. Feeling the heavy crash of the wing, a single, unharmed body woke.

Dissoriented by the crash with vision blurred by the flames, he swam for safety. He was not sure if it was real, or a part of his dazed imagination, but the man could see an invisible hand twist the trails of fire before him. He followed their path, in hopes this wa...
(continues)
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Joby Dick

Dec 5, 2010, 11:11 PM
put together a masterpiece soon enough...

You just wait...muwahahahaha!!!!!
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Amarantamin

Dec 24, 2010, 9:30 PM
Smile
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Ishamael

Jan 22, 2011, 5:01 PM
Test.
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Ishamael

Jan 22, 2011, 5:01 PM
Okay, done testing now.
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:53 AM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream through his closed mouth. Out he bursts taking a few large thankful breaths. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and terribly the flames are the only thing he can see that is moving. Somewhat distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on. Finding a piece of fuselage he begi...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:56 AM
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream through his teeth. Out he bursts taking a few large thankful breaths. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and the flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Now distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on while he calls out for help. Finding a piece of fuselage he begins to make his way away from the flames which almost encircle him. As he moves towards the now sinking tail section a large explosion blows him off his piece of safety and back into the water.
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 11:04 AM
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on while he calls out for help. Finding a piece of fuselage he begins to make his way away from the flames which almost encircle him. As he moves towards the narrow exit the sinking tail section explodes blowing him off his only comfort and back into the water.
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 11:07 AM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 12:41 PM
After awakening a second time under water he makes his way up again to the surface, surely this can't be good for one's health. But this time when he breached the water he's greeted by a far nicer sight. A light house, which the tail had been hiding is a mere 30 feet away with the lights on. After making his way to the light house he climbed the steps leading up to the door hoping to find someone to help in his search effort for the other passengers. After banging on the large double doors he opens them and is greeted by complete and total nothing...The absense of sound, the absense of light, just nothing. He's almost too afraid to move forward but after a moment, desperate, he ventures in. A loud popping sound causes him to jump back and he...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 12:51 PM
After awakening a second time under water he makes his way up to the surface for a second try, surely this can't be good for one's health. But this time when he breached the water he is greeted by a far nicer sight. A light house, which the tail had been hiding is a mere 30 feet away, with lights on. After making his way to the light house he climbed the steps leading up to the door hoping to find someone to help in his search effort for the other passengers. After banging on the large double doors he opens them and is greeted by complete and total nothing...The absense of sound, the absense of light, just nothing. After searching for a lantern and trying out his now soaked matches, desperate, he ventures in slowly moving in the dark. A loud...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 1:45 PM
After awakening under water, again, he makes his way up to the surface for a second try, surely this can't be good for one's health. But this time when he breached the water he is greeted by a far nicer sight. A light house, which the tail had been hiding is a mere 30 feet away, with lights on. After making his way to the light house he climbed the steps leading up to the door hoping to find someone to help in his search effort for the other passengers. After banging on the large double doors he opens them and is greeted by complete and total nothing...The absense of sound, the absense of light, just nothing. After searching for a lantern and trying out his now soaked matches, desperate, he ventures in slowly moving in the dark. A loud poppi...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 12:52 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 1:08 PM
Laying down on the top of the stairs, overlooking the sea, he decides to rest a moment.

He is awakened by the morning sun peeking up above the water. The wrecked plane has now all but disappeared except a few pieces of charred fuselage. What had happened to the plane to force it down, was it the engine or lightning, he couldn't seem to remember? The last thing he had in his head was taking a smoke while opening a package from his parents. Oh how he wished they were here now to help him as they had done all those times growing up with them. Venturing back inside the song and light pop on again and he takes another look around, but again only the door out and the bathysphere. It's a very strange room, the way it's designed looks familia...
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 1:10 PM
6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 1:11 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 1:47 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 5:32 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 8:04 PM
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.

I took a few large breaths and looked around. The crash has scattered burning wreckage all around and the flames are, morbidly, the only thing I can see moving. I started searching for something to float on while calling out for he...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 8:23 PM
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.

I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help ...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 8:52 PM
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.

I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help but...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 8:54 PM
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.

I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help but...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 30, 2010, 2:50 PM
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems, to him, like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.

I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help. Noone a...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 9:11 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. Looking around he quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 30, 2010, 5:57 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After what seems, to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, th...
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 30, 2010, 6:03 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After ,what seems to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and takes a few large breaths. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving....
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 30, 2010, 6:10 PM
6.
Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.

The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After ,what seems to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and takes a few large breaths. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving....
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 31, 2010, 10:14 PM
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After ,what seems to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and takes a few large breaths. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, the main fuselage is in pieces that are strewn about burning. Luggage and bodies are floating in the water next to him. He reaches over for an oversized bag and uses it to float on while he calls out for help. Noone answers, only the hiss and pop of burning metal and the stench of burning hair. Latching onto a piece of fuselage he begins making his way out of the flames which almost encircle him. What had happened? Was noone else alive? Why had the plane crashed?. As he moves towards the narrow exit ...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 8:51 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video s...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 9:11 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 9:13 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 9:43 PM
All of it underwater! Neon signs lit up a passing school of fish and a pod of whales swam gracefully through the city as if it was a normal part of the sea! Jack was dumbstruck by this ridiculous undersea metropolis. The pod moved closer to the city and Jack could make out lights scattered throughout the cities towers and even what he, hoped were shadows. As the pod approached one of the sealed walkways he could see a flashing spark, and as it got closer he could see that it was a person in a diving suit doing maintenance on the walkway with a torch. Jack was washed over with a great sense of relief at the sight and was now very hopeful that he might get home. The sub began pulling into a hole that must be the docking station and all the sud...
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:06 PM
Two men were speaking back and forth rapidly, it was halfway through a conversation but they were saying something about an explosion up top! And that a transport was headed down. The man in charge was definitely Irish and told the other to come meet the transport and bring the person inside safely back. Safely back? And the man getting told what to sounded a bit scared about what he was getting ready to do. Hmm that's not a good sign. Well at least there are people down here, and he was confident it was just a little paranoid of him. The sub went past a few more ads for various strange things before it finally docked. There in front of him was a man, with a radio, walking cautiously towards the glass door of the sub.

Suddenly he looked ...
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:15 PM
Suddenly he looked up and began sprinting to the sub, yelling for Jack to let him in. Jack started opening the door and the man was almost at it when a jagged looking man jumped down from above and gutted him with what looked like meat hooks and then with one swift move lopped off his head. Jack quickly shut and secured the door. The creature came to the glass window and looked in, he...wait it's a she was wearing a tattered suit and what appeared to be a bloody mardi gras mask. She then screamed and jumped on the sub Jack began looking for something to defend himself with. Seeing the lever he began trying to snap it off while the woman began trying to tear a hole in the top of the sub! The woman was somehow succeeding in punching a hole i...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:17 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 23, 2010, 10:22 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 24, 2010, 2:40 PM
Suddenly the man looked up and began sprinting to the sub, yelling for Jack to let him in. Jack started opening the door and the man was almost at it when a jagged looking man jumped down from above and gutted him with what looked like meat hooks and then with one swift move lopped off his head. Jack quickly shut and secured the door. The creature came to the glass window and looked in, he...wait it's a she was wearing a tattered suit and what appeared to be a bloody mardi gras mask. She then screamed and jumped on the sub Jack began looking for something to defend himself with. Seeing the lever he began trying to snap it off while the woman began trying to tear a hole in the top of the sub! The woman was somehow succeeding in punching a hol...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 24, 2010, 5:48 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 24, 2010, 6:39 PM
Jack opened the door to the sub feeling strangely unafraid of what was outside the sub. As he stepped out he slipped on something and looking down there were picket signs scattered throughout the room with blood on them and phrases like "Rapture is Dead" and "Down with Ryan". Looking further around there were broken lights and rubble scattered throughout the station, sure signs of some kind of squable.
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 5:35 PM
Chapter 2 - Rapture
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 29, 2010, 5:44 PM
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 30, 2010, 12:47 PM
Jack opened the door to the sub feeling strangely reassured by them an on the radio's words. As he stepped out he slipped on something and looking down there were picket signs scattered throughout the room with dried blood on them and phrases like "Rapture is Dead" and "Down with Ryan". Looking around further there were broken lights and rifle shells scattered throughout the station, well it's official, something is wrong and he no longer feels so reassured. The exit to the room has been caved in by debris and Jack begins removing debris from the doorway. A faint *thump* sounds from back in the bathysphere main room. Jack turns and walks out of the lobby and into the main room only to find that a different "splicer" is now sniffing around...
(continues)
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madmatg

May 31, 2010, 2:30 PM
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips! " The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

*******Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech with "But I chose something different, I chose the impossible! I chose...(canvas lifts and vi...
(continues)
...
madmatg

May 31, 2010, 9:57 PM
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips! " The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I chose the im...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 5, 2010, 6:28 PM
As the sea grows darker, a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a presentation.

"Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips!" The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I ch...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 5, 2010, 10:08 PM
Jack opened the, now heavily splintered, glass door to the sub feeling strangely unafraid of what was outside the sub. As he stepped out he slipped almost falling into the water behind him. Looking down there was a stack of picket signs and others strewn about the room with phrases like "Rapture is Dead" and "Down with Ryan". Crimson stains were on the walls, the windows, and the signs. A chandelier lies shattered in the middle of the floor in what must have been the waiting area to what Jack now sees was a transit station. Rubble lies scattered throughout the station, sure signs of some kind of squable.
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madmatg

Jun 6, 2010, 5:13 PM
Jack opened the, now heavily splintered, glass door to the sub feeling strangely unafraid. As he stepped out he slipped almost falling into the water behind him. Looking down there was a stack of picket signs and then more of them strewn about the room with phrases like "Rapture is Dead" and "Down with Ryan". Rifle shells litter the room and crimson stains are splashed on the walls, the windows, and floor of the room. A chandelier lies shattered in the middle of the floor in what must have been the waiting area to what Jack now sees was a transit station. Well, it's official, something is wrong and he no longer feels so reassured by Atlas' speech. Jack rounds the corner into what was the entrance hallway to the room and notices a large sche...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 6, 2010, 5:07 PM
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 6, 2010, 5:08 PM
As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.

" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 6, 2010, 8:45 PM
As the sea grows darker, a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a presentation.

"Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips!" The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.

Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I ch...
(continues)
...
madmatg

Jun 7, 2010, 9:30 PM
Running back to the door, Jack stepped on the rigged lever/wrench putting all of his weight on it to try and dislodge the piece of rubble. It finally pops loose but is accompanied by an unwelcome crash as the rubble above it splashes out into the hallway. Jack ,now frantically, starts throwing debris out of the way. He knows that must've caught the attention of the splicer, who promptly appears around the corner of the lobby. He had another of those masks on and was wearing a beat up baseball uniform, what is going on with these people? What are they looking for? He looked malnurished and was generally ragged looking with this crazy look in his eye like an opium addict back home.

----Slugger: What are you doing there boy?

Jack got the ...
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Amarantamin

Jun 22, 2010, 9:17 PM
...ran a thread all by yourself for a month and a half. I claim the Siemens forum in your name.

Use it well.
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