Genesis Brings 2 Touch Screens to Life at U.S Cellular
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Eric, please proofread.
I enjoy Phonescoop on a daily basis, but the last two lines of this article is just a mess. Please proofread before publishing, or at the very least, get someone else to glance at it first.
"U.S. Cellular also announced that it, too, will off the HTE Merge world phone. The Merger goes on sale June 9 for $149.99."
Nothing personal.
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Hmm. I corrected those typos immediately upon publishing. Sorry you managed to catch them before the cache reset with the cleaner version.
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I believe you missed a couple errors. For one, I'm relatively certain the company is "HTC" not "HTE". Also, you went a little overboard with the commas.
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And though I don't doubt the longevity of its capabilities, I'm willing to bet you meant external storage not eternal..
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This last comment made me cry tears of laughter...
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